• We thought that you held the shots steadily all the way through were appropriate.
• We liked the way you did different angles during the scenes in the church and and the way you did closer ups and different distance shots.
  
• We thought your thriller material contained a lot of thriller conventions and we liked the way you used them in your footage.
  
• We really liked the fact you made your flashback footage in black and white, it really went with the theme of a thriller with a hint of eerieness. The footage is all in a good light and sets the atmosphere well.
  
• The cuts were in good places and the scenes weren't too long which kept us interested.
  
• The sound was good, helped with the atmopshere, was a bit repetitive, but good. We thought the little girls voice was a bit creepy, but also a bit horror like.
  
• The title was a bit a random, but then we didn't really understand what the narrative was clearly. The beginning title and the end title... the ends were cut off, didnt understand why?