Thriller opening in more detail

The first shot the screen will be pitch black, and the faint whispering and giggling of the little girl, then a creak of a church door, as it fades in to the scene of the hooded figure walking into the church. This will then go to a close up of the man removing his hood. There will than be a high angle shot and the as he walks closer to the alter and the voice will ask him "What are you doing here? Your not a religious man." he will then twitch to show that this voice is a pain to him, as he twitches the camera will get close to show this. This will then be tracked along the aisle as you see him walking closer to the alter. The closer he gets a flashback will pop up, the first one will be a long-shot still of the assassin with his hood up and a knife in his hand from behind. and he will flinch, "You can't escape..." he will then walk a bit further then two flashbacks will happen in quick succession, a person alive and happy, and then a dead person on the floor, with blood trailing out. the image will then be back to present as he stumbles slightly and the voice will say "...I'm part of you now..." he will then pass a lone man praying and again more flashbacks will appear of his past murders. This will then show his face as he is starting to sweat from the strain as this happens the voice will still taunt him asking him to "remember his past, and all he has done wrong", as he shouts "SHUT UP" The man praying will then look up confused. There will then be a shot of the assassin running up to the alter, so you can see the door behind and how far he has traveled in the church. when he gets to it he will collapse to his knees, and a close up of his face as he shivers, eyes closed and he presses his hands to his face to prey. The voice will then show a quick succession of flashbacks of murders and deaths, some from the earlier flashbacks and some new ones, with the voice constantly taunting "remember, you did this because of me!". The final shot in the flashback montage will be the assassin with a female, this will then zoom out from the assassins eyes as he collapses, it will then fade to black as the assassin passes out. The voice quietly announcing "She is dead because of US!" The title 'voices' will then appear across the screen, initiating the beginning of the film.