A coffee in the morning analysis

Overall we are pleased with our final product, there was not much to change after our rough cut, it was mostly the music and extension/speed/colour of the shots. We also changed the music so the contrapuntal music was taken out completely, and the music is made to blend into the situation more. We also removed the environmental sounds of the flashbacks, as the birds in the background do not go with the dark feeling of the scene. At first you could hardly hear the voiceover, so we decided to make the background music lower and the voiceover louder, although it is still not totally audible it is better.